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Re: Cage
Hey SubjectBlue, let's see what you've got here! General impression I think this poem is about the "cage" of other peoples' expectations. You've chosen a King, whose job (in a ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Pokébook: Kanto
Nick | Halfway up a mountain (or something) It was a tough climb. The dirt track had given way to stone steps cut precariously into the side of the mountain. ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Under The Tree's Tears Chapter 1
Hey Adara -- well it's review day! Just one thing before I begin: you've used at least one swear-word in this piece, which isn't a problem if you "rate" the ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Pokébook: Kanto
Nick | Pokémon Academy The aural exam was over quicker than Nick’s last meeting with Professor Oak. No assessment that lasted less than two minutes could have ended well, could ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Post your pie here
What flavour is that pie, Chibibo? :wink:
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: What's your favourite word?
Shenanigans . Because, well, shenanigans! :P
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Dead Broke -- Chapter 2
I can't put my finger on it, but there's something irresistible about this novel. Please keep writing! :wink: I'm going to do things slightly differently this evening. 1. The Good ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Post your pie here
So much loff! :D Edited:
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: Pokébook: Kanto
Nick | Pewter City | Day 2 Tosech berries always carried vivid dreams, and Nick had eaten two. It wasn't a very good plan. Not good at all. But with ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: Pokébook: Kanto
Nick | Pewter City | Day 2 So far, so good. Nick was trying to keep his gawking under control. First there was the marble -- stunning slabs of rock ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Pokébook: Kanto
Nick | Viridian Forest | Day 1 “ Take a break ,” David whispered. “ We brought fruit !” Nick wondered for a moment why the other two had brought ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Pokébook: Kanto
Nick | Viridian Forest | Day 1 With the Stun Spores taking effect it didn’t take long before the wild Caterpie slid over Eve’s shoulder, leaving a gooey trail down ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Dead Broke -- Chapter 1: Part 2
Hello again! I'm afraid to say it's not the greatest conclusion to your first chapter. There were gems here too, but I don't think the second part lives up to ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Pokébook: Kanto
Nick | Viridian City | Carnival Evening “Memories are money, don’t you think?” With a parting smile, Kristine turned on her heel and dashed after her new friends. Something inside ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Dead Broke -- Chapter 1: Part 1
Please, take this review with a pinch of salt -- I know exactly how subjective humour is, but naturally this review is going to include that. So, [in my opinion] ...
Jul 11, 2011